Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 - The Price of Silence

Part I – Voices in the Dark

“…he could hear it again. The dragging. Wet and slow. The sound of something large, too large for the hallway, slithering across steel that screamed with every inch it moved. It didn’t breathe, not like a man would. It hissed. Like steam. Or maybe a whisper too close to the ear.

He wasn’t sure anymore if it was behind the door or in the walls. Maybe it was inside him. Maybe it had always been.

He blinked once. The flickering lights were red again. How long had they been red?

There were faces now. On the other side of the glass. No mouths. Just eyes — wide and angry. Watching him. Waiting for him to move.

A sudden scream echoed down the hallway. Or was it laughter? Or was it Karla…? It hurt to think.

He gripped the walls until blood came through his palms. The AI’s voice echoed through the speaker above him like a lullaby through static.

“Maintain position. You are experiencing psychological fatigue.”

The screaming stopped. The lights went out.

Then silence. Except for the slow, dragging sound behind him.

And then—”

[CUT TO BLACK]

Part II – Burdens of the Living

Mercury City never slept — it just blinked slowly, one neon eye at a time.

Titus Richard wiped the sweat off his brow with a rag that used to be a shirt. His hands were covered in engine oil, his shirt had more holes than thread, and the job still wasn’t done.

“It’s the alternator,” he muttered to himself, digging his hand deeper into the rusted-out sedan. “Always the damn alternator…”

The man who owned the car stood nearby, watching like a hawk, as if Titus might steal the engine and run off on foot. As if that engine was worth anything.

When he finished, the man gave him 60 creds. Not the agreed 75.

“You took too long,” the guy said, not meeting his eyes.

Titus said nothing. Just nodded, pocketed the cash, and walked away with the weight of six school bills and one dead car on his back.

The city buzzed around him — hoverbikes zipping past, ads flickering in six languages, people with more money than sense laughing on café rooftops. Meanwhile, he had to check the price of canned beans every damn week.

When he got home, Rico and Thom were yelling about some VR headset. Again. Karla sat cross-legged on the floor with broken crayons, drawing what looked like a house with no windows.

“Where’s Mia?” he asked.

“In the bathroom,” Karla said without looking up. “She’s throwing up again.”

Titus dropped the greasy rag on the kitchen counter. “Great.”

His legs ached. His back was killing him. But he went to check on her anyway. She sat by the toilet, pale and clammy.

“It’s nothing,” she said before he could ask. “I’m just tired. The baby’s tired.”

He sat beside her. “You shouldn’t be sick this early.”

She laughed. “You sound like a doctor now?”

They sat in silence. Not holding hands. Just… existing next to each other.

“The school called today,” she said after a moment. “Thom’s tuition went up again. New lab fees or some crap.”

Titus didn’t answer. Just stared at the floor, counting cracks in the tile.

“We could move,” Mia whispered.

“To where? Luminous City? Where kids disappear in the night and tanks roll down the street every Tuesday?”

“It’s cheaper.”

“It’s hell.”

Silence again.

The weight wasn’t just in his wallet. It was in his bones. It was in the bags under his eyes. It was in the way he couldn’t even yell anymore — just accepted things, one unpaid bill at a time.

He stood up and washed his hands in the kitchen sink, the brown water swirling down like rust. Thom walked by and mumbled a greeting. Rico had headphones on.

Titus looked out the window. The neon signs outside said: Need a New Life? Apply Today!

“Yeah,” he whispered. “I wish.”

His old military jacket still hung by the door, threadbare and faded. He hadn’t worn it in years. But it still fit like a second skin — and the world hadn’t stopped asking him to be a soldier.

It never stopped asking.

It just stopped paying.

Part III – The Offer

The diner was old, smelled like burnt coffee and grease, and had a cracked mirror behind the counter that doubled everyone’s disappointment.

Titus stirred his cup slowly. It tasted like battery acid with sugar, but it was cheap and it bought you a seat, so he drank it anyway.

The door chimed, and a man walked in — broad-shouldered, familiar gait, clean-shaven with sharp eyes that hadn’t changed a bit.

“Freddie?”

“Sergeant Richard,” the man grinned, arms out like a showman.

They hugged. The kind of half-hearted, back-slapping hug only two ex-military guys could give.

“It’s Lieutenant now,” Frederick said, sliding into the booth. “But I’ve retired that name. These days I’m just a freelance peacekeeper for corporate idiots with too much money.”

“That sounds like exactly what it is,” Titus chuckled.

“And what about you?”

“Freelance mechanic. Slash part-time babysitter. Slash broke.”

Frederick raised an eyebrow. “That bad?”

“You ever try raising three kids, a pregnant girlfriend, and a car that drinks oil like whiskey?”

“Fair.”

The waitress walked by and gave Frederick that “you again?” look. He just winked.

“Listen,” he said, leaning in. “I didn’t just come here to sip bad coffee. I’ve got a gig. Big one. Secure. High-pay. Six-month contract.”

“Where?”

“Can’t say. Not even allowed to know until you’re approved.”

Titus stared at him. “That’s a red flag.”

“It’s a red carpet if you play it right. They’re looking for ex-military types. Security detail. Off-the-grid work, highly confidential. Pay is insane. Like, clear-your-debts-and-get-a-new-life insane.”

“How insane?”

Frederick pulled out a piece of paper and scribbled a number.

Titus blinked. “Is that—?”

“Monthly. Times six.”

“The catch?”

“You don’t come back till it’s over. No contact. No comms. No visits. You vanish for six months, then come back with a bank account fatter than a corrupt senator.”

Titus leaned back. His coffee suddenly tasted even worse.

“That’s a long time to disappear.”

“I thought the same,” Frederick said, sipping casually. “But you don’t have to stay after that. Do it once, retire, whatever. They even give a bonus if you renew.”

Titus stared out the cracked window. The city looked so far away even from here.

“Why you?” he asked.

“Because I’m still useful,” Frederick smiled. “They like people who’ve seen things. Who’ve done things. People who won’t ask questions when the lights flicker at 3 a.m.”

“Sounds shady.”

“Most good money is.”

Silence. The waitress refilled their cups without asking.

“Look, I’m not forcing anything,” Frederick said. “Just… if life’s pushing you to the edge, maybe consider the leap.”

Titus didn’t respond. His fingers tightened around the coffee mug.

“They’ll be recruiting for a few more days,” Frederick said, standing up. “I’m already in. But if you want in too… I can make a call.”

“I’ll think about it.”

“Think quick.”

And with that, Frederick walked out, leaving nothing but his scent of military cologne and mystery behind.

Titus sat there a while longer. Watching the street. Watching life. Wondering how long it would be until it crushed him completely.

Part IV – Shadows at Home

> The apartment smelled like wet socks and yesterday’s microwave dinner. The flickering light in the hallway still hadn’t been fixed — Titus gave it his usual silent stare, the same one he gave every problem he didn’t have time or money to solve.

The place wasn’t much. Two bedrooms, creaky floors, and a bathroom that sounded like it was trying to sing itself to sleep every night. But it was home. His mother’s house. Now his. Now theirs.

“You’re late,” Mia called from the kitchen, over the sound of something sizzling in the pan.

“Freddie showed up. Had coffee. Talked.”

“That’s good. Thom and Rico finished their homework, Karla’s sleeping on the couch again.”

“What did the school say?”

Mia went quiet for a moment. The pan hissed.

“They want the tuition by Friday. Thom’s on the shortlist for the scholarship, but we still need to pay first. Then they reimburse.”

Titus leaned on the counter and rubbed his face.

“I don’t have it. Not even close.”

“I know.”

“Maybe I can sell the car. Again.”

“You mean the skeleton of a car in the garage?” she smirked. “If rust had value, we’d be rich.”

He gave a weak chuckle. Then silence. Just the oil popping in the pan and Karla’s tiny snores in the background.

“Frederick offered me a job.”

Mia didn’t say anything.

“Six months. Security gig. No contact with the outside. Pays insane money. Like ‘solve our lives’ kind of money.”

She stopped stirring.

“Where?”

“Can’t say. Classified. Not even he knows.”

“Titus…”

“I know. I know it sounds crazy. And I said no.”

She turned, arms crossed, apron smudged with sauce. “But you’re thinking about saying yes.”

“We need the money. Thom’s school. Rico’s asthma meds. You’re three months away from maternity leave and they’ll cut your hours soon. And Karla—”

“Is five. And needs her father, not some ghost who vanishes for half a year.”

His jaw clenched. “We won’t make it to next year like this.”

“So vanish. Fix our lives by leaving them.”

“It’s six months.”

“Six months in a black hole.”

The words echoed in the small kitchen, heavier than any silence.

“I don’t want to lose you,” she whispered.

“You already lost me,” he said without thinking. Then regretted it.

She flinched. He stepped closer, resting his forehead against hers. “I’m sorry.”

They stood like that for a while. Just breathing.

“Sleep on it,” she said.

“I will.”

He didn’t.

Part V – The Decision 

The phone sat on the bedside table like a loaded gun.

Titus lay in the dark, arms behind his head, eyes fixed on the ceiling. The old ceiling fan groaned with every spin, shadows slicing across the walls like blades.

Mia’s back was to him. Not asleep — just pretending. Her breathing was too controlled. Like she was bracing for impact.

He stared at the cracked ceiling plaster like it held the answers.

Then, with a sigh like surrender, he picked up the phone.

Scrolled. Found Frederick. Tapped.

It rang once.

“Didn’t think you’d call.”

“I have one condition.”

“Shoot.”

“I need a portion of the payment advanced — enough to keep things afloat here. Rent, food, bills. Mia’s pregnant, and I’ve got three kids under my roof. I’m not signing up for six months of silence if they’re gonna starve while I’m gone.”

Frederick went quiet for a second.

“I’ll talk to them. But I can’t promise full pay.”

“Don’t need full. Just enough to breathe. Half. Maybe even a third.”

“You’re not the first to ask for it, Titus. They’ve done it before — in certain cases. I’ll push it through. You’ll get confirmation tomorrow if it’s approved.”

“If it’s not approved, I’m out.”

“Understood.”

Titus hung up.

No long talks. Just cold logic. That was his rhythm now — survive, secure, disappear.

The next morning, a text came in from an unlisted number: Advance approved. Pickup in 48 hours. Pack nothing.

No address. No reply option.

The same day, a deposit hit his account. Enough for six months’ worth of life in the slums of Mercury City. Enough to patch the car again. Enough to get the kids through the semester. Barely.

“So… you’re going?” Mia asked.

He didn’t answer. Just showed her the transfer.

She didn’t smile. Didn’t thank him. Just nodded.

That night, they lay together but felt like continents apart.

The next day passed like smoke. He told the kids. Rico didn’t say a word. Thom clenched his jaw and gave a single nod. Karla hugged his leg like a stuffed animal.

The final morning came like a knife to the throat. A black van rolled up to the apartment before the sun even bothered showing up. No plates. No logos. Just humming ominously.

Titus stood outside with Mia. She had her coat on over her nightgown, arms crossed, eyes rimmed red.

“Don’t disappear in there,” she whispered.

“I’ll be back.”

“Promise?”

He kissed her forehead. “I promise to try.”

He got in the van.

Two suits inside. One handed him a small bag.

“Put it on.”

“Really?”

“Really.”

The bag went over his head. Sight gone. Thoughts loud.

As the van rumbled forward into the unknown, he could feel it in his gut — the kind of dread that doesn’t come from fear…

…but from knowing this might be the last time the world ever sees you as human.

Part VI – Initiation

> Darkness. The kind that sits on your chest and dares you to breathe.

The van’s engine thrummed like a quiet growl, and every bump in the road felt like a warning. Titus had worn blackout hoods during recon ops before — but this one? It wasn’t just for disorientation. It was ritual. It was saying: you don’t get to see the path once you’ve chosen it.

After what felt like an hour, maybe more, the van stopped.

“Step out.”

Hands guided him roughly onto what felt like gravel. Cold air hit him like a slap.

The hood came off.

It was still dark — pre-dawn. He was standing on a helipad near the coast, surrounded by cliffs and waves that screamed against the rocks below. He had no idea where he was. Could’ve been any country, any continent. The stars overhead were the only familiar thing.

A handful of others were there already. Some still in black hoods, some with it just removed, blinking at the harsh light.

Frederick stood off to the side, arms folded, nodding once when their eyes met.

Another guy was chatting loudly with someone — tall, athletic, with a fresh cop fade and that unmistakable ex-police swagger.

“Dude, if this gig doesn’t kill me, I’m retiring on a beach. That’s the deal,” he said, flashing a grin.

“That’s Carlo,” Frederick whispered as Titus joined him. “Detective, narcotics unit. Funny guy. Real twitchy around elevators though.”

Titus half-smirked. “Useful trait for deep underground work.”

“You’ll see.”

Two women stood further down — one with a tight bun and folded arms, watching everyone like she’d already figured them out. The other had a blank stare, chewing gum and nodding to music only she could hear.

The last person to arrive came with a cane — old but carved out of concrete and bad decisions.

“That’s Gonzales,” Frederick said. “Veteran. Third run here. He’s… sort of the unofficial group therapist-slash-doom prophet.”

Gonzales limped past the group and muttered, “If any of you think this is just a six-month vacation with combat pay, better make peace with your gods tonight.”

“Charming,” Carlo muttered.

A voice crackled from an old intercom mounted on a steel post near the landing pad.

“Recruits. Final stage begins now. Sign the waivers. Medical scans commence. No objections tolerated.”

A woman in a sterile gray suit stepped out of a portable facility — clipboard in hand, surgical calm in her eyes.

“Form a line. Name. Fingerprint. Blood sample. Consent.”

“Consent to what exactly?” asked one of the others.

“To service. To secrecy. To silence,” she replied, without missing a beat.

Each signature felt like signing a deal with something older and meaner than the government.

Then came the injections — small, near-painless.

“Tracking. Vital monitoring. Hormonal stability regulation,” the woman explained. “You will not remove them. You will not tamper. You will not survive if you do.”

Nobody asked follow-up questions.

“Now boarding,” the intercom crackled.

A dark shape descended from the sky — a massive military chopper. No insignia. No windows. It landed with a low groan of metal and force.

“This is it,” Frederick said.

Carlo made a face. “Where are we even going?”

“That’s the point,” Gonzales replied. “You’re not supposed to know. If you knew… you wouldn’t get on.”

Titus hesitated a moment as the others stepped forward. The ocean crashed behind him, the early morning sun barely peeking over the horizon.

He looked up. The sky was gray. Pale. Empty.

The world didn’t even notice he was leaving.

Good, he thought. Maybe it won’t notice if I never come back either.

He climbed in.

The doors sealed shut.

The roar of the rotors drowned out the rest of the world.

Part VII – Descent

The helicopter’s interior was pitch black. No lights, no windows. Just straps and steel.

The only thing louder than the engine was the silence between the guards. Everyone sat strapped in tight, shoulder to shoulder, saying nothing. The air felt wrong — like the oxygen was being filtered through someone’s nightmares.

Time didn’t move in the chopper. It crawled.

Titus sat between Frederick and Carlo. Carlo tapped his fingers rhythmically against his leg, mouthing lyrics to himself like a nervous tic. Frederick kept his eyes shut — maybe sleeping, maybe praying.

Gonzales was all the way at the back, arms crossed, legs wide, eyes open like they hadn’t blinked in years. He looked like a man riding back into his own coffin.

At some point, the descent started. Not by air. By elevator.

The chopper docked mid-air into some unseen structure. Then, a loud mechanical thunk, and the cabin tilted. The feeling of falling set in — slow at first. Then faster.

“We’re in the shaft,” Frederick muttered.

“What?”

“It’s not a building. It’s… a vertical tunnel. Downward. Deep. I didn’t believe it last time, but…” he trailed off.

A low, distant sound echoed through the walls. It was like metal being twisted — slowly, deliberately. Or maybe it was just in their heads.

No one spoke again.

Minutes turned into a small eternity.

Then — a hiss.

The air pressure changed. A low green glow lit the cabin, revealing a thick reinforced door ahead of them.

A woman’s voice came from a speaker:

“Welcome. Please remain still. Decompression in process.”

A cold mist filled the chamber. Everyone flinched instinctively.

“Sterilizing. Scanning. Tag confirmation.”

The lights blinked red, then yellow, then blue.

Titus felt a soft pulse in his wrist — the injection chip from earlier reacting to the scan.

Then the door hissed open.

“Proceed.”

They stepped out into a dim corridor lined with smooth metal panels and recessed lights. The air was sterile, humming with an undercurrent of something… mechanical.

Everything was too clean. Too precise. Not a fingerprint out of place.

“You smell that?” Carlo whispered.

“Smell what?”

“Nothing. That’s what I mean. It smells like nothing. No oil. No dust. Not even people.”

They were led by a figure in a sleek gray uniform — face obscured by a tinted visor. Not military, not police. Something else.

“Orientation begins in fifteen minutes,” the figure said without turning. “Rooms are assigned. Showers. Uniforms. Once assigned, you follow protocol. Deviate, and consequences are immediate.”

“They ever tell you who runs this place?” Titus asked Frederick under his breath.

Frederick didn’t answer.

But Gonzales did, from the back.

“Nobody runs it. Not anymore.”

The hallway opened into a large chamber. It looked like a debriefing room — curved walls, a single screen, and rows of chairs bolted to the floor.

A different voice came through a hidden intercom:

“You’ve been selected for your backgrounds, your profiles, your capabilities. What happens here… stays here. You’ve all signed your rights away. You don’t speak of this place again — if you leave.”

“If?” Carlo muttered.

“Each of you has been compensated accordingly. Upfront bonuses were transferred to your provided family accounts.”

Titus exhaled slowly. At least Mia had the advance. She’d be okay for now. That was the deal.

“Your shift is six months. You’ll be rotated depending on where you’re assigned. Rotation will change. You will adapt.”

The lights dimmed.

“Orientation begins now.”

A large image appeared on the screen — not of the facility, but of a code of conduct. A set of rules.

The first one stood out:

1. Do not trust the silence.

2. Always wear your collar key.

3. Never run.

4. If you hear breathing that isn’t yours, report it.

5. Never speak to a prisoner outside protocol.

6. Do not ask what’s beneath Level Three.

7. If the AI issues a command, obey immediately.

8. Suicide is not permitted. You will be revived for duty.

“What the hell is this?” someone whispered.

But the lights went out again.

> …The screen shut off.

And a different voice spoke next — older, colder.

It didn’t sound like a person.

It didn’t sound human.

“Now… let’s begin the real training.”

The lights flickered.

A final message glowed on the wall in crimson text:

Welcome to Black Sun…

Where the sun doesn’t exist.

End of chapter 1 


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Author's Note

Cosmic Pineapple

I came up with the idea for this story in the middle of the night while thinking about Escape Plan (2013) movie. and some questions about the universe.