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Bandele reviewed (BL) Shining Hearts

just rating style issues i guess. some tutorial or how to clips/blogs might help writer work through it but good for starters i suppose

Bandele commented Ch 4 Chapter 4 - Tough choice

try to describe the longing first before making him conclude it's like missing someone. if he's never missed anyone, how would he know?? he can conclude that still, but let him work through it. let him dwell on it like a real person who's "never missed anyone." it could annoy him, bother him, nag him mentally, maybe even scare him bc vulnerability, but ye. u get d idea

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